Tuesday, 4 February 2014

Imran's Neat Desk

My desk was all messed up and Miss Tyler-Smith asked me to clean it and make it right. It only took me 5minutes. It is now sparkling clean. I didn't realise it was so easy to keep it tidy and from now on I will always keep my desk neat when it's messed up!

by Imran - Grade 4


  1. Imran's mom loves this very much :D!
    by Imran's mom

  2. Miss Tyler-Smith loves that Imran's Mum loves this! :)


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